“Barrette Girls” by Sara Saab

August 17, 2017

The short story “Barrette Girls” by Sara Saab was published on the 3rd issue of liminal stories on spring / summer 2017.

Synopsis:

In “Barrette Girls”, Sunday with the help of Andrew guides a group of girls to a secret destination. Andrew has second thoughts about what they are doing while Sunday is remembering her past relationships.

Analysis:

Sara Saab reveals gradually the nature of the characters’ lives. We enter a future world which would be described as a utopia by the oblivious observer. But what happens behind the curtains of this world paints a grim picture of our future civilization. How long will the staff reason with their consciousness? Sunday learns to get used to it. As people are used to it nowadays but that doesn’t mean that the process wouldn’t have an impact in an unconscious psychological level. Or in a level that we don’t want to acknowledge and maybe see only in our nightmares.  That’s how the author tricks us and take us by the hand as Sunday takes the girls by their hand and we can only be suspicious of what’s going on until it’s too late.  A sense of unfamiliarity and uneasiness underlines the story climaxing till the end.

Wrap Up

  • 8/10
    Writing
  • 8.5/10
    Plot
  • 8.5/10
    World-building

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